People have different ideas about whether keeping health is getting easy(ier) compared with (to) the past. I
agree with the given statement, because (of the improved) accessibility of (to the) medical
information, vaccination, (and the) development of technology (that) allow us to improve our healthy than in
the past.
First of all, we are available to medical information easily (medical
information is easily available to us). If you have
a time to invest on your health, you can get (readily have) access to the
great amount of information readily through the internet at anytime. To be specific, in
the past, there was (were) a lot of people to like (who liked) a burned meet. (Burned meat?) Compared with
the past, Nowadays, known that having a burned meat is deleterious (harmful) to our body, people are reluctant to have a burned meat
for their health. Like this case, the more (the) common sense of medicine (about health) spread(s) out, the more people was (are) enlightened by medical information, allowing
people to (and) vitalize(d).
Secondly, vaccination reshape(d) our life into (a) more a desirable and
healthy way. For example, in the past, black plague spread out throughout the
Europe sporadically. However, now, we can hardly find the person who have a difficult (has difficulties caused by) with such a illness. From
such a precedent, I believe (that) vaccinations have (has) positive
effects on our health.
Finally, in (a) specified of field in (of) medicine, we
can take an advantage in (of) our health. (←There is no logical link in
this sentence, even though you will later describe, at least the first sentence
has to make a complete sense.) From the invisible mental diseases to the physical sickness(es), various range of study(ies) of (in) medicine was (have) researched accurately and specifically. As a result,
Not only can we (allowed us to) consult with the mental doctor (psychologists) to solve (cure) mental disease but also can we (and to) exploit a lot of (take helpful) pills, including such as vitamin(s) or (and) taurin, for keeping our heath.
I believe that research of (in) medicine have an (is) beneficial for (to) our body and
mental health.
To sum up, I agree that nowadays, we tend to be healthier than previous
time due to increasing a common sense in medicine, taking a shots, (and the) advanced medical studies. |