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There
is a old proverb- the more the better. Sometimes this might be true,
however when it comes to friends, I prefer to have one or two close
friends to spend my time with for the following reasons. First, it is
easier to make a decision, and make it possible to share stories in
depth.
To
begin with, it is less likely to have conflicts. When getting along
with a group, it is hard to compromise all different opinions when
making choices. This is pretty obvious since people want different
things, and such differences make conflicts and discordance. For
example, I once went to a school trip with bunch of other classmates
to Jeju island. At first, it was fun spending time with large number
of friends. We often played games such as hide-and-seek, and stayed
up all night talking. However, as days passed I realized that it was
uncomfortable to spend time with large number of friends. Since there
were too many people, some of my friends were often missing during
the trip, and we couldn’t even recognize it. When the free time was
given to travel around , it was hard to make a decision where to go.
In the process, we had to go through some big and small conflicts,
and we eventually had to split up the groups for greater efficiency,
and to prevent from more serious conflicts. After dividing the group,
we were able to spend our time as we pleased, and that experience
taught me that it was never good to spend time with many friends at
once.
Furthermore,
spending time with fewer friends enables to share stories in depth.
Since there are only two or three friends involved, each friend can
share their story more in details, thus nourishing the content of the
conversation. In addition, each individual can have more chance to
share his or her experience, while it is impossible to do so when
talking with large group of friends. To be more specific, when
chatting with many friends, my story were often not properly conveyed
to others. There may be several reasons- some might have not been
able to hear my voice clearly, or some simply might have not paid
attention to my story, since they were talking to others. Sometimes
my story was ignored by my friend’s interruption. Also ,although I
was able to hear about many things in a short time, none of them were
in connection , and only the fraction of it remained. However, when I
talk with few friends, I can share stories both in depth and variety.
By hearing each other’s story, I could have better understanding
about my friends, and thus I could feel the strong bonding
and
growing friendship.
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