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The reading passage asserts that professors should more focus on their research rather than teaching. However, the speaker contradicts the passage with opposing view.
First of all, the reading passage argues that professors' research and publications bring money to the university(,) and solve solving the university's financial problems(,) and eventually benefits students. However, the speaker actually points out that the primary purpose of a university is to teach students. He also emphasizes that as a university is not an profit organization. (문장 완성이 안됐습니다. 그가 강조하긴 했는데 뭘 강조했죠? 대학이 profit organization 이 아니니까 다음의 내용이 없습니다! 완성시켜주세요.) Because of this, education should be a top priority of school and is much more important than money at the same time is not only a top priority of a university, but also more important than making money.
On top of that, the speaker denies the reading's assertion that focusing on research helps to improve a school's reputation because more professors can write a variety of publications. Contrary to reading’s claim, On the contrary to this, he claims that it damages the university's reputation. His main reason is that the students cannot learn appropriately because the professors university fails to concentrate on teaching/ proper education. Consequently, less students will come to the university while more students leave leaving. Thus, focusing on researching will eventually harm the university's statue.
Furthermore, the reading claims that the university can make professors improve their knowledges and expertise by giving pressure for new research. On the other hand, the speaker asserts that excessive pressure for research negatively affect professors. Instead, appropriate pressure for research may increase the productivity of professors. This is because if the university requires too much research, professors cannot pay attention to teaching students and it will lead them to poor education. Therefore, requiring professors to focus on research may worsen the quality of education.
For these reasons, the speaker challenges the reading passage's point that professors have to concentrate on research more than teaching.
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