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Lecture denies that reading's information
about how, when, and where dogs became domesticated. --> Reading 과 Listening이 어떠한 주제에 대해 상반된 입장을 가지고 있고 --> 각 입장이 어떻게 정리되는지 작성해주세요.
The author of the passage is talking about dogs evolved from
wolves that were trained by humans as hunting companions. However, the lecturer totally disagrees on it by claiming that it is hard to believe that
wolves help people to hunt. People and wolves' hunting style were so
different that made more difficult to hunt. Also, ancient wolves were really
aggressive to be trained.
The author also says that dogs were domesticated
approximately 16,000 years ago. DNA proves the evidence of the domestication. However, the lecturer claims that it is much earlier than 16,000 years ago. Scientists found
dog's footprint with a young boy in at least 26,000 years ago. (Reading이 주장하는 바와 Listening이 주장하는 바에서 어디에서 대조점이 있는지 작성한 뒤 각자의 입장을 요약해야 합니다)
Reading claims that the compelling evidence
prove that dogs were domesticated in China and then spread to other areas; however, the lecturer does not agree on it. Lecturer claims that the oldest fossils were found in
multiple places, including China. Four different places as China, North Africa,
Middle East and Europe had the oldest fossils of the dog.
Lecture deny about how, when, and where
dogs became domesticated reading claims because of these reasons.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
ADDRESSING TOPIC
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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FAIR
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LIMITED
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LIMITED
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FAIR
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LIMITED
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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- 각 detail이 point별로 정리될 수 있어야 합니다. - 최상급 the 사용 등 관사 사용 실수가 많습니다 - Lecturer/Author등의 주어를 사용해주세요. |