▶ Your Answer :
It is often said that the
past is just an passed event which is and
not unnecessary for the future because
these days the society is changing incredibly
and people should eager to prepare and forecast for to the future by
stepping with the speed of changes. My point of view,
however, is that the past plays a very important role to their life. This
is because the history is repeating as well as reference of the past helps makes us
lessen diminish mistakes.
To begin with, according to the proverb of United
States, history repeats itself. From the history, there were lots of empires
(어떤 empires 에 대한 이야기를 할 지 설명해주세요. 예를 들면, 과거를 중요시 여기지 않아 망한 나라들.. 등이 될 수 있겠습니다~). Most Almost
of gigantic
empires were strong at first but they were finally
ruined due to illegality and corruption finally. (나라가 멸망한 이유가 “과거의 일들을 무시해서” 가 아니라면 이는 적절한 예라고 볼 수 없습니다. 왜냐면 현재 주장하시는
바가 과거가 미래에 중요한 영향을 미친다 이기 때문입니다. 따라서 제시하신 예와 주장하는 바를 연결시키려면
위와 같은 설명을 분명하게 해주셔야 합니다. ^^) A famous book introduced by in the Korea Times has shown that
many historic scholars insisted that we can draw a lesson from the history and this
taught will make our future profile.
On top of that, the rate of making mistakes will
be decreased. This is because people can be learned from their passed experiences or events. For example, in the past, my older brother had a car and he drove drived
very recklessly. One day In
some day, he had
an accident which crushed a truck and it was because of high speed that he was
not able to control because of high speed he could not
escape the moving unsteadily truck. so he crushed the truck. Though he was did not wounded seriously, it was
terrible so now he fixed/changed reform his bad habit and does
not make any accident the
incident like the past.
On the whole, history is reiterated and experiences from
the past are helpful to lessen people's errors. Of course, to estimate the future,
knowing well about the past is necessary. Accordingly,
I think people should use the past to solve the problems of the present and
future. |