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The reading passage is talking about the benefits when the professor appear to on TV because professor appear to broadcast, the professor itself can benefit by increase this can improve the reputation of professor, and the university too. Also, the public can benefit too by gain an real expertise and insight from professor rather than TV reporter. But the Lecture is questioning about who does really benefit? The Professor is skeptical about appear to broadcast.(Hard to understand) Because First, the professor actually cannot considered from serious important conference or academic journal. (What does it mean?) Maybe they can gain reputation from colleague professor, but they are more likely to be entertaining students rather than teaching them with good educational materials because they have to attract as many audiences as possible not serious scholar, and they tend to be more entertainment rather than deep knowledgable scholar. As a result, the professor who appear on to TV may be considered to be less expertise, and hard to get money about research. (Why do they get money, what research?) And also, in order to be appealing to on TV, they need many times. Including on TV recording, they also need time for rehearsal, make-up for their appearance, traveling time, and figure out what to be introduced in the television. This times decrease time with would have a bad impact on the quality of lecture student and in the on-campus time.
And Finally, the lecture is skeptical about Public benefit. The TV doesn't want a serious lecture in broadcasting, because it makes people bored easily. They want just a 'academic title', and the 'serious lecture' So public can not attain the professors' appearing or their insight, they just get a background or brief explanation, which also can introduced by Tv reporter. (Meaning?)
In the sum of this To sum up, the lecture (What lecture?) is saying that there is no actually benefits when the professor appearances on to television.
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