■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : All High school students should learn basic economics. Do you agree or disagree? Explain your opinion with details and examples. |
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▶ Your Answer :Some people might say that it is not
necessary to have the economic class in the high school curriculum. However, in
my opinion, it is beneficial for high school students to have economics beside
other classes. This is because basically they use much money as they grow and
it is the stage right before being an adult. First of all, economics are need to be
taught in the high school as they start to participate in the society of money more and more.
To be specific, they use more money than they did previously. They purchase
their stationery products and stuff they are interested in. (and으로 문장을 시작하지 말아주세요.) And this is a good
way to spend money as high school students. For example, when I was a (관사 필요합니다) 10th
grader friends around me began to have their own card. Or sometimes they use
their parent's (소유격 표시) card. This is the natural progress as they get older. Most of the
seniors in the high school have their own card and began to manage themselves.
Their parents also strongly encourage them to manage their own financial
situations.
On top of that, this is time students (대명사는 문단 첫 문장에서 사용하지 말아주세요) need to
be prepared before being an adult. Learning economics would help a lot to
recognize financial problems they face from the news. The problem they face
from the news might happen to them. Then, they can handle the problem more
calmly, because they know the problem and how to overcome the circumstance. For
instance, students who are interested in business or stock market as their
major absolutely need economic class before they learn at the university. And
it will be great help to overview current economy situation.
In conclusion, I believe that economics class is
necessary for the high school students as they use more money than they did in
the past. Moreover, they need to practice being as adults. In this regard,
economics are helpful for the students in the high school. |
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2. 사소한 문법
오류가 잦은 편입니다.
proof-reading을 꼼꼼하게
해주세요.
3. 그냥 economic가 아니라 economy class 또는 economics class 로 대상을 바꾸어주시면 더 좋을 것 같습니다.
아니면 learning basic economics 도 괜찮을 것 같습니다.