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A university can contribute a lot of good things to a city, but it also brings some disadvantages. Locating a university can have a variety of effects and they can be both beneficial and harmful. However, I would say there are more advantages than disadvantages.
To start with, it gives you more profits and helps you live with more convenience.
Since it can accommodate many students, the population in the community will increase and the marketing area will expand. Therefore, it is natural that the residents get more profits and live more conveniently. Besides, a university provides various facilities and cultural benefits to the residents. For example, people living around the Kyung Sung University can use many facilities in the university such as museum, library, swimming pool and the fitness center. They can see a concert, lectures and exhibitions. So Therefore(So를 문장 시작할때 쓰면 좋지 않습니다) it has great advantages to building build a university in our community.
In addition, it would offer jobs. It needs architects, engineers and many workers to build a university. To run and maintain the campus, it would also hire people. You can expect even educational developments. It drives more competition among universities, resulting in upgrading the quality of education. This gives the students opportunities to get high-level of education, which leads them more competitive than others. Moreover, students are motivated to study hard by the due to the influx of university students.
On the other hand, it has some disadvantages. As the population increases rapidly, traffic jams/accidents and many forms of crimes are unavoidable. Especially, the juvenile delinquency is a serious problem. For instance, you can easily see teenagers smoking or drinking at night. Besides, There are problems of environment/noise pollutions. The exhaust from cars causes air pollutions, and the domestic sewage from houses cause water pollutions. This environment/noise pollutions are seriously bad for both physical and mental health.
In conclusion, locating a new university has some disadvantages such as traffic problems, juvenile delinquencies and environment pollutions. However, it gives you more profits such as earning lots of money, improving the quality of your life, providing good surroundings to educate. Generally speaking, it has more merits than demerits, and demerits are tolerable when thinking about merits it gives. Establishing a new university will not be a good idea for those who want to enjoy a quiet, peaceful life. However, for those who want to live modernly among young people and who are looking for cultural life, it will be a great choice to establish a new university.
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