It is evident that in our current society why the reason people watch a movie have tremendous importance in our lives. Some people think that the movie makes the audience to think about serious issues,while others do not. I however, believe that many people tend to watch a entertaining movies. There are serval reasons that I could discuss to support my argument so I will limit my discussion to the two that I feel are the most relevant to the topic. Frist,people watch a movie to reduce a stress. Also, they want to watching movie which different world far away from reality.watch movie that is different to reality.
First of all, the most importnat reason for my feeling this way is (that) people usually stressed out from something. such as “ School” and “Work” Commonly in society. To relieve stress away, people watch a movies.A cause of disease is a stress in modern society. Most of doctor and scientist agree that the stress can bring about a lot of malady. Therefore, they recommend that people watch the entertain movie movie that entertains to the way of reduce reducing stress.According to recent research conducted by National Public Health Service Policy Act in Korea, Japan, and China, every nation in the world need to put their head on to Health service. Many countries to foster one of the policy to reduce stress. funny movies are included in them. If people pay only the cinema ticket. only pay movie ticket, they are able to not only relieve stress, but also prevent many diseases. Consequently, After people watch movies designed primarily to amuse and entertain. and they will be able to healthy.find happiness and be healthy.
Also, the most importnat reason for my feeling this way is (that) most people want to different world.Sometimes people imagine that to change their life in the another world. It is a way that watching movies stimulate to easy the imagination.문장이 애매모호합니다 This applies in a variety of different but relevant situations.My friend Tom, when he was a high school student. He was crazy about fantasy world. He had often supposed to be a Wizard. but he was felt lack of imagination. He always search for something to stimulate his imagination. As a result, he was watched entertainment entertaining movies It named which is“ Harry Potter” If he didn’t watch the movie he could not have imagined the wizard. It seems clear that entertainment entertaining movies can give to imagination which that shows a different world.
All things considered, with the reasons mentioned above, I believe that I have sufficiently and adequately explained my position on the matters regarding this topic.
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