▶ It is often says that some people succeed with his or her luck, and add that one should encounter luck in order to live successful life. However, I believe that luck is nothing to do with the success because for two main reasons: luck is not a factor of success and many reap a best result by hard working in one's field.
The chief argument for my inclination is that luck cannot help one to be success. succeed. This is because it is a very temporary thing, and even if one reap the success through fabulous luck, one might fall down in a soon. For example, when I admitted to top high school in Korea for due to my math ability, I was not able to adopt adapt(adopt:입양 adapt:적응) in school life because I had to keep face up with several other exellent student and actually, I had took the school entrance exam which I studied before the exam애매모호합니다~. The study matterial material was very same with the real test, and I was able to get such a great high score on that. But However, (But은 문장 시작할때 쓰지 마세용) after that, I'm turely fail to keep my GPA in a good grade and eventually drop down from the school. This clrealy shows you that the luck is cannot lead one to success.
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The another important aspect of this is that working hard is the only the way to success because through one's working, one might obtain great treats or learn primary lesson for the success. According to study conducted by Seoul National University in Korea, In today, most successful CEOs were went through such a hard way to learn a vlauable valuable things to be succeed.succeed. The study shows that 75 percent of total top CEOs were grown in poor familiy background and 10 percent of them had met some chaotic experiences. This implies that hard working is necessary to achieve permanent success in one's life.
In conclusion, the reason for people's success is their heavy works.(새로운 문장으로 시작하는게 더 낫습니다) and Luck cannot support them because it might lead to fail someday, someday it might lead them to fail and people need important lesson through their hard work. People in today should take their suffers in their lives without being too worrying about it because it is a sign of will making that leads to successful future.
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