government should spend more money on supporting museum and music performances than on recreational facilities (such as public swimming pool and park.)
As the society has developed, people spend their free time in a variety of ways than before. In this respect, some people argue that it is the time for governments to spend money for the art museums and music performances than recreational facilities. However, as far as I am concerned, I disagree with the given statement because we still need recreational facilities more for these following reasons.
To begin with, there is still the shortage of the space for students to relax themselves. In Korea, to enter the prestigious university would guarantee the success. In this sense, most students start to study hard as soon as they are junior high school students. As a result, they do not have much free time, but the real problem is that there is a little places for them to have their valuable free time. According to the survey conducted by the Ministry of Education in 2007, 74% of Korean students have no idea to go when they have free time. And the one of researchers who performed the survey mentions that this is because there are not enough places where students can enjoy their free time with friends or family.
Moreover, recreational facilities are still good place for families to have pleasant time together with a little cost. Due to the downturn of national economy, most families have gone through harsh time. Even though they are in the difficult situation, the time with their own family would be still important. In this sense, recreational facilities would be the best place to provide happy time for all family members. According to the survey performed by the Ministry of Labor, they prefer spending time in recreational facilities to watching art performances or going to art museums because of their financial issues.
To sum up, I believe that we are in needs of having recreational facilities as many as possible; it would be great place for students to take a rest and it is also good for most families to have their free time with a little cost.
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