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Education is important, and for several centuries, all educators try to find the best way to offer high quality of the education to students. It totally depends on teachers who directly communicate with the students. The most important ability what they need is having ability to have good relationship with their students, because it evokes their intrigue, and teachers should be their counselor for them as well. Also, teachers should be student's counselor as well.
To begin with, having the ability for teachers to relate well with students well is more significant since it encourages students to have interest in that subject. The very first step to study is having interest in that subject. In order to achieve that, if students like that subject’s teacher, then they would study automatically. For example, according to the grades from Fort Richmond Collegiate that when students had not no good relationship with teachers then, they skipped a lot of classes, also their grades were almost failed. However, when they had with a very funny biology teacher, and had very good relationship, it made them to attend the classes, and his joking in class with students made them to study harder, so obviously their grades were around over 80%. Thus, the result apparently shows that relationship between teachers and students is the most important thing aspect for studying.
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In addition, teachers should have more ability for well socializing with friends, because teachers are the people who are helping students’ problems not only giving knowledge. Most students undergo unstable period, so they have a lot of problems. Students need a person who can listen to their problem and give hands to figure find out the solutions. Teachers are the people who can be. For example, especially in Korea, University KAIST, which has a lot of intelligent students, has high percentage of committing suicide. Currently more than 5 people committed suicide. If their teachers give more attention to their problems, then they would choose to commit suicide. What they need was not only knowledge, but also getting care from their teachers. Thus, teachers should have well socializing skills with their students than only giving knowledge.
To conclude, having good connection with students is very helpful to teachers, because it makes them to study in that subject. Also, students have need to have a person to take care of who can take care of their troubles, and when teachers handle them very well, then they can lead them into better way of living. Therefore, educators have to focus more on how to being socialized well with their students than offering them academic information. |