주제-오늘날 가족과 함께 식사하는 것은 중요하지 않다. 반대입니다...
솔직히 개인적으로 이번 에세이 맘에 드는데..
바디1이랑 바디2를 순서를 바꾸는게 더 자연스러울까요 아니면 이렇게 써도 될까요..? 둘다 괜찮을거 같아서요.. :-)
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As people’s lives get more complex due to developing technology and as everyone’s daily schedule is different from one another’s, some people think that having meals with family doesn’t help improving kinships. However, I strongly disagree with that idea and I’m sure that it is very important to have meals with family. This is because a member of family can soothe each other’s feelings and also because people talk to each other a lot when having meals together.
First of all, life may not go the way you want it to go, and you might feel distressed. You’ll need someone who can listen to and placate you. You might think that your friends can understand you better than your family members do if you spend more time with your friends, but it is not true, either sentimentally or scientifically. Family is who you’ve been living with since you were young so they know almost everything about you, which means they are able to sort things out properly for you. Also, family members share similar genes, therefore it is most likely that they would believe in the similar way you do. No matter how close a friend can be, he couldn’t have spent more time with you than your family did.
Furthermore, many people talk about each other when they eat together. The more you talk to or listen to them, the better you’ll understand them. Once you get to understand each other, you’ll be able to enjoy spending time with them and feel more comfortable asking for or offering help. For instance, randomly selected people were divided into two groups in a psychological experiment. People of GROUP I had meals together every day and the ones of GROUP II had meals separately. Except for meal times, everyone spent time together for the same amount of time. The result was that GROUP I had 8 quarrels and GROUP II had 23 in 10 days. This shows that having meals together greatly influence people’s interaction among each other.
To summarize, family can be aware of your problems and suggest solutions better than your friends can do, and having meals together help people to have strong understanding toward each other. This evidently proves that having meals with your family is significant in two different ways. Therefore, I think that it is very important to have meals with your family members.