■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : People today pay too much attention to personal lives of celebrities |
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It is often said that knowing privacy of
entertainers is the right that people have to know. So, many people usually
regards invading one’s privacy as taking for granted. But I strongly believe
that encroachment about entertainer’s privacy is so excessive that we need to
reconsider our attitude. This is due to the fact that excessive coverage about celebrities
privacy prevents from important coverage and can invade entertainer’s privacy.
9분
To begin
with, newspapers and magazines usually are interested in privacy of celebrities.
in the past, newspapers and magazines play a pivotal role in forming public
opinion and providing valuable information. But now, they are only engrossed
with entertainer’s gossip. One significant reason is that they want to pay
attention to readers with provocative article. So, essential problems such as
ramification of election, economy recession and international article can’t be
provided to reader in spite of the importance. For example, In 2007, North
Korea launched missile to intimidate other nations. in fact, This news was so crucial
problem to South Korea in that North Korea threatened peace of East-North Asia.
But Korea press only reported very famous singer’s privacy, divorce. Regardless
of this importance, many people even didn’t know the incident. This reflects
that excessive interest in celebrities of privacy is waste of valuable social
resource, journal 27분
In addition,
we are able to see easily celebrities invaded their privacy. So they always
suffer from threat from camera of what is called ‘paparazzi’ and they must invest
much money in preventing their privacy including employing bodyguard and
install security camera. Sometimes, entertainers hurt in the process of evading
of paparazzi. The best example of this is Princess Diana ‘s death. It was said
that Diana always suffered from paparazzi. She was likely to felt supervised by
camera. Most of privacy they had ranging from her financial statement and
sexual life was covered at newspaper’s gossip corner. After all, she abruptly
died because of paparazzi’s pursuit. If people hadn’t celebrities’s wrong
interest, she would live happily now. 41분
To summarize,
there is a no question that people are excessively interested in one’s privacy.
As a result, crucial problem is covered with entertainer’s gossip and
entertainers experience encroachment their privacy. Although interest to other
people is inborn trait, privacy cannot compare with curiosity. 47분 | |
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