It is more important for people to spend time at work than with their families
■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :It is more important for people to spend time at work than with their families | |
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Some people argue which is important between family and work. Of course there are different conclusions according to each personalities and value of lives. But i strongly support that family is the most important thing in our lives. We can find easily the person who can control the family dominate the world. We can make a successful lives with good family relationship and support from the family.
To begin with, we live more time with family members than company colleagues everyday. If we have some troubles with our family, we can not focus on the job at the offices. So we can say family is the starting point of social life. Let me take a example, the 'golf emperor' Tiger Woods has collapsed after he has had love affairs with many girlfriends and had a big trouble with his wife. People are saying golf is the game of mental, the world best player in the touble can not do his best.
Furthermore, the family member can make us cheer up when felt frustration, so we can try again and attain our goals at last. In my cases, family always make me stay in the best conditions, therefore i accomplished many goals. Good relationship with the family member is the fact of success lives. There are proverb saying in the China that if you want to succeed in the world, first of all you should lead a successful family life.
For the reasons mentioned above, i really support the good family relationship and good condition in the home. We should remember that the person who are good with their families can make successful lives in the society.
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