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There is an argument about whether people should more cooperate with others than the past or not. However, I believe that the ability to cooperate with other people is important to people who live in the modern society. In this essay, I will insist my opinion with two ideas.
Firstly, It is hard for one to lead a company. Putting it differently, companies have become bigger than the past ones, it is impossible to lead the corporation without worker’s helps. Even ‘Apple’ or ‘Samsung’, there are abundant employees who work for their company. If there were a lack of worker’s corporation, such big companies could not thrive untill today. Also, nowadays, all the duties that workers do are sophiscate and successive. In the case of plants, if one absences at a large assmebly line, it will have a huge effects on the factory. Therefore, the sense of cooperation is necessary principle to live in the present society.
In addition, cooperation can be a method to communicate with people who do not familiar with us. As the morden society becomes dry, we need to learn how to live together with others by cooperating each other. Otherwise, the moderns will suffer from isolating. According to a survey conducted by Tokyo University, 89% respoders answered that the relationship with their neighbors becomes better than before. Because they did common chores together with neighbors such as sweeping the roads or aiding rebulid neighbor’s fences. After assisting each other, they become more accustomed(friendly쓰는게 나은가요?) to people who live in their next house.
In a nutshell, I believe that the sense of cooperation is a mandatory notion to all people. As I said above, when many people work together for their firms, they will reduce the head’s burdensome. Also, by sharing one’s chores, we can improve the relationship with people who lives nearby your house. For these reasons, cooperation is necessary virtue for the moderns.
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