■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : the large shopping center will be establish in the community. agree or disagree? | |
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There has been an argument concerning whether the establishment of a large shopping mall can bring many positive effects to their community or not. Although a small number of individuals may disagree with the above statement, the majority will think otherwise. As for me, I am very against of building a big shopping center. This is because it can cause inconvenience in life. In addition, it can give rise to environmental pollution.
First of all, establishing a big shopping mall can give disturbance to the residents' daily activities. Of course, I am aware that it might give vitalizations to the local economy. However, it seems to me that the drawbacks of building a huge shopping center far outweigh the benefits of this. To illustrate, surrounding areas of the shopping center wouldn't be full of various recreational facilities, but there may also have extremely increased volume of traffic. As a result, there would appear the electric light of the neon signs from many facilities operated over midnight, making it difficult for local dwellers to sleep peacefully. Futhermore, increased many cars and buses around the mall result in serious traffic jams, thus making it hard for people to commute. Hence, the construction of the huge shopping center should be opposed with regards to disturbance of our lives
Secondly, a big shopping center has a negative effect on environment in the neighborhood. Opponents of this point of view might claim that the enterpriser of the mall hire some workers to make the local areas clean and balanced. However, this argument is not always convincing if you consider the following fact that the effort the mall makes is not effective enough for most of the time. From my experience, when I lived next to a big department store, there were a lot of offensive honks of many vehicles. As a result, I had trouble concentrating on studies as well as taking a rest peacefully at home. On top of that, the streets got used to being dirty by many customers of the mall. Therefore, a huge shopping mall is detrimental in terms of environmental contamination.
To conclude, I definitely disagree with the suggestion that a huge shopping mall has many helpful effects to the community on account of the reasons that I mentioned above : Not only does a large shopping center bring about the interference of the life, but it also causes noise and wastes pollution.
Regardless of what others say, I think it is about time to recognize that shopping facilities give continuous interruption in our lives. | |
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