The widespread use of the Internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today's world? |
The intelligence of human beings has been growing ever since a civilization first developed in Mesopotamia. From that epoch, human beings were able to share their knowledge within the civilization, thus becoming more intelligent beings. Nowadays, people have knowledge that they never had access before; these knowledge came from the Internet, which contains almost all the information one can be looking for. With the widespread of the use of the Internet, people are able to carry out education in an innovative way, research topics one desires, and share knowledge. Nowadays, most schools have internet access within their campus. With internet access, the schools are able to provide students with innovative teaching methods. When I was a freshmen in High School, my school started class with Laptops. The classes were regular classes except that it required students bring a laptop to school. With access to the internet, the students were able to research information during class times, which helped them get a better view of the subject they were learning. The teacher would also give classwork assignments that had to be researched via Internet. While the students did their own research, the teacher would sometimes help the students out and even add extra information. This way, the students learned not only from the textbook, but also from the internet, which allowed them to get a more profound knowledge of a subject. Since old times, people have been learning from others. During these old times, information was only passed orally in this form; however, nowadays, with the access to the Internet, people are able to gain much more knowledge. When information is passed down orally, its validity cannot be proven and the information would probably be superficial. However, with the access to the Internet, people are able gain information that is more trustworthy and detailed. The most valuable information in the Interent would be ideas of other people. With such a widespread use, the Internet contains various views or ideas of people in different subjects. Rather than straight-forward facts, these ideas have made the human beings more intelligent than anything else by giving them a sense of being open-minded. Without this widespread of sharing ideas via Internet, most people used to be parochial; however, with the Internet, in which various ideas are contained, people were able to learn about how the others think of a certain subject. By accepting some of these other ideas or views, people were able to become more open-minded, thus opening up their minds to new knowledge. People's knowledge was able to develop due to the widespread of the Internet, which provided innovative education, the sharing of knowledge, and the availability of information by searching. The innovative education methods provided students with better education, and the availability of information in the Internet allowed people to delve into a subject they wanted to. Most importantly, the sharing of knowledge via internet allowed people to change from being provincial to becoming opne-minded. With these innovations, human beings reached a level of intelligence that has been never reached before. |
누가 첨삭? 좀해주세여...
재가여기 처음이라서 첨삭이뭔지도확실하지않지만 점수매겨주는것같더군요..
이거 시간제한 30분해놓고 쓴거구요... 30분맞나요? 토플에대해 잘몰라서.... 재가알기로는 라이팅2가지 유형이있던데.. 이런유형이 30분맞나요?
그리고 처음해봐서 notepad<-- 여따가 쓰고 워드에다가 붙여넣기하니..와. 단어틀린거매우 많더군요. 타자로 쳐서 잘못치면.. 잘못쓴걸로되고..
재가 체크할타임이없어서 스펠링 에러가 꾀나있더라구요...
스펠링에러 이정도있어도 만점받을수있나요??
또 라이팅 점수 몇점이만점이죠? 라이팅 전체가 30점만점인데..2가지 유형이있으니. 어떻게점수가 매겨지나요??
재가 특례학생이라서 꼭 만점을받아야해여... 근데 리딩하는데 매우안되더라구요... 으.....라이팅은 처음해봅니다.
리딩팁도좀주실분은 감사하겠읍니다.! 활동이제부터 자주할께여!