it is bettter to spend on a thing that will last a long time or a short-term pleasure such as the vacation
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Some people say that spending on something that will last a long time than enjoyable events such as vacation. However, I disagree with the idea that something that remain a long time is more worthwhile than pleasant moments for two reasons. First, spending on a vacation can be enjoyed with other people. Second, the memory which is made in pleasant time can permanent.
First of all, although an object is only pleasure of one person who have that, in a vacation, we can share happy time with other people. Of course, when a person gets a precious object, only the person can feel great satisfaction immediately. However, if we have enjoyable moment with surrounding people, we can give good memories to my people with same value such as money. Let me take my experience for example. When I was in the first year of university, I have enough money to buy a watch which I want to get because I had worked after graducate from high school. But, I did not spend my money buying the watch, because I heard that my best friend would emigrate to US. I decided that the friend , aother friends and I traveled to the sea. We had a moment which we could not forget. Although I did not buy the watch, my friends and I have more valuable memories. In this sense, investing money in pleasant time with people who we love is more valuable.
Second, the enjoyable time such as vacation gives permanent retrospection even until we die. Truly, the happiness through a object can not continue for a long time. But, the memory which people make with other people provides joyful feeling after finish the travel. Later, as people have talk about the time, they can remember the happiness. And it is available in that many people make peace after having a quarrel through thinking the pleasant momory together. Especially, in a man-woman relationship the happy time displays the real value. My grandmother often says that the mement which grandfather and she traveled to Japan when they were young can not forget forever. This shows that, the memory is more valuable than a thing.
To sum up, I disagree that it is better to spend on a thing than pleasant moment for those reasons that I mentioned above. First, we can share a happiness with other people. Second, people can have good momories permanently.
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