■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Today, young people do not help their community. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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It is often said that the young don’t contribute anything to their group recently. Some people might agree with this statement because young generations are normally regarded too selfish and put much value on their own lives. However, I disagree that younger people are more likely to make efforts for their community in that they have already known that they can get others’ help only when they help others and in that in generally, they can accomplish their goals more easily, only when collaborate well with others.
First of all, young people generally know that as their efforts such as time, money for others is worthy, others’ is also worthy. In other words, they acknowledge that if they want to get others’ help, they should also give hands to others. This means contributions for their community. For example, most of the young people generally search for information on Internet Blog, a kind of community on web, which they belong to. The more affluent Internet Blog’s information is, the more materials the members of Blog provide. This means they are able to get a wealth of information on Internet Blog only when they make for their own group. This today’s situation makes people help community more actively.
Secondly, young people have learned that a group is occasionally more efficient to get to goals that a individual when they were at the school years. Nowadays most of schools teach their students efficiency and importance of cooperation in class because a job is performed together by several people in most of companies. For instance, when I was in college, I had a chance to present a topic in front of students, which I and my classmates prepared together. At the time, we got bad scores in the class, because one of members often was absent from the meeting and he didn’t his best to do it. When we made up for these topics, we decided who did what and allotted part of work. As a result of this, we learned that doing the best for a community is also helpful for us.
In brief, I strongly believe that most of the younger people help their community because they have known that helping others and cooperating with others is important and valuable. That is why I disagree that young generations are selfish and aren’t concerned about their groups. | | |
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