Thanks for your previous advice( keep the eassy simple and do not abuse fancy words). This time I wrote another essay with remebering your advice. If any of you see anything be improved, please leave a comment. wishing you all to have a nice day:D
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Renewable source of energy will soon replace with fossil fuel?
In this era of rapid social and technological change, leading to greater complexity of society, fuel is probably the single most important commodity. Some people predict that fossil fuel will still be a dominant source of energy in future, whereas others believe that new alternative energy source, such as hydrogen or organic fuel, will make fossil fuel as out-of-date energy source in near future. Personally, I believe that renewable source of energy will soon take over the predominant position of fossil fuel as source of energy.
To begin with, even at this very moment, numerous green projects are underway to find alternative energy that is less detrimental to the environment. The biggest advantages of those green fuels, including renewable source of energy, are not only they are environmentally friendly but also can be reused unlimitedly; which means that people can greatly save money by using them. In fact, the scientists or researchers who carry out such experiments can easily acquire financial supports from the government or other global organizations that incredibly help them speed up the project. In this respect, it is obvious that such source of energy will be available to public with much simpler access and greater ease that can greatly encourage the public to use, thus, leaving fossil fuel as obsolete.
In addition, another obvious reason for the argument is that the amount of fossil fuel left in the planet is likely to be completely consumed within only 50 years. This means that the supply of fossil fuel cannot meet the demand in near future. Therefore finding renewable source of energy is not only to be desired but also is indispensable to sustain our lives. Thanks to rapid development of technology, it is possible for us to have renewable source of energy that can be used over and over again. In this respect, people’s financial benefit is one of manifest reasons of using renewable energy, but more importantly since we do not have enough fossil fuel left in our plant, it is clear that renewable energy will be used as the main source of energy in future.
Simply put, I wholeheartedly believe that renewable source of energy is the next generation of main fuel. It is especially clear when we consider the factors such as many great supports to find more eco-friendly fuels that are less harmful to nature, and also insufficient amount of remaining fossil fuel in our planet.