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We don't exactly know why we yawn. There are some theories about the reason of yawning mentioned in the passage. However according to the lecture, they are not very convincing.
First, there is a theory that yawning could be a non-verbal way of communication. However, we also yawn when we are alone. Also, if yawning is a way of communication, then why do we surpress yawning trying to prevent other people from knowing that we yawn? It contradicts the theory. Second theory tells us that yawning is a way of equalizing pressure in the ear with the surrounding air pressure. However according the the lecture, there is not enough evidence to this theory. We yawn regardless of air pressure around us. We dont only yawn when we are high up in the air.
Lastly, the third theory that is mentioned in the passage says that yawning is a method to increase alertness. However, we tend to sleep quickly after we yawn. And it is known to be more relaxing after you yawn rather then being more alert.So this theory, like the first case, contradicts the theory mentioned in the passage.
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