▶ Your Answer :
The reading and the lecture both talk about recycling. The reading states
that single-stream recycling has a three disadvantages. However, the lecturer
argues that there are 3 reasons why it is beneficial.
The reason in the conversation are not
convincing.
One of the reasons that the reading states is that Single-stream
recycling is dangerous. The reason for this is that they use a automatic
system. It also break breaks dangerous material. Such as, glass bottles such as glass bottle. Therefore,
employee can hurt from it. On the contrary, the lecturer argues that this statement
is false. It is because, single-cycling recycling have has a safety training
system. Furthermore, employee have a protect equipment. Such as, glove and protect
glasses has a protection equipment such as glove and protected glasses.
Another reasons that the professor in the reading argues that valuable
resources is wasted.
The reasons for this is that high-quality paper
used for making cheap box. On the other hand, the lecture claims that this argument
is also erroneous. This Is because, it is more convenient
Every family member can participate in this
recycling system.
Finial reasons that the reading goes on to explain is that Single-stream
recycling is too expensive. Because, many
cities have limited budget. And it is three times higher than building
traditional ways.
However, the lecturer asserts that this
explanation does not make sense. For example, one truck is used only one kind
of resourse resource in traditional ways. However, single-stream ways are going to using use
only one truck to using several resources. Thus, this ways is more beneficial
than traditional ways. Fair: 17~23 점수: 23 일단 대채로 비교되고 있는 리딩과 리스닝을 잘 비교하였습니다. 하지만 문제가 되는 부분은 두 번째 이유입니다. 본인이 말햇듯이 얼버무렸다라는 느낌이 확 듭니다. 따라서 통합형 에세이를 서술 할 때에 리딩과 리스닝에 집중하면서 듣거나 보기 바랍니다 왜냐 하면 통합형 점수는 얼마나 적절하게 리딩과 리스닝을 비교하였냐 에 따라서 좋은 점수가 나오게 됩니다. 또한 문법적 오류들도 있으니 제가 첨삭한 것을 보고 확인 하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
두번째 강의의 반박 이유를 제대로 듣지 못해서 얼버무렸습니다.
------------------------------- 리딩 내용 : recycling is useful . however, this method has been shown to have many disadvantages. 1. single stream recycling is dangerous. recycling center is responsible for separating paper~ 중략. it frequently breaks glass bottles. employees at the plant have to manually remove these brokn pieces of glass an are at risk of causing injury 2.leads to a waste of valuable resources. this method of sorting various materials in one bag is far from perfect. sometimes, broken glass will get mixed in with collected paper. this may contaminate paper. in this case, high quality paper has to be used for making cheap boxes. 3. S-S recycling is too expensive. 건설비용이 기존의 세 배가량. 많은 도시는 제한된 예산을 가짐. 그러므로 이 도시들에게 재활용 방식을 바꾸라는 것은 합당하지 않음.
렉쳐 내용 : 1. it's hazardous. But it is not dangerous at all because ther are many ways to avoid danger, . 이유 : 안전교육 제공. 보호장비 제공 2. 전통적인 재활용 방법은 귀찮아서 많은 가정이 참여하지 않는다. 그러나 singlestreem recycling 은 간편하다. 더 많은 가정이 참여할 것이다. 비록 적은 양이 오염될지 몰라도 더 많은 가정에 기여하는 장점이 있다 중략 3. 리딩의 주장인정하나, 전통방식은 많은 트럭들이 필요하다. 예를들어 한 트럭은 오직 재활용 만을 위한 것이다. 하지만 이 방법은 모든 쓰레기를 한번에 치울 한대의 트럭만이 피룡하다. 이는 연료와 인건비 측면에서 이득이다. |