▶ Your Answer : In the reading passage, there is ample support of the author's claim that there are several difficulites to rescue reptiles from descructive habitat and move them to safer environment are ample supports on the relocation of reptiles. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point. First, the professor contends that overpopulation can be solved throuth making new several habitats and increasing capacity of existing habitats. For example, in the case of UK. they used unoccupied area to accept reptiles and multiplied capacity. It makes habitats to accommodate a significant reptiles and they do not need to compete for food or living space. This cast doubts on the reading passage's claim that it is possible for new places which is suitable for reptiles to be already occupied. It can arouse overpopulation and competiton competition forx getting food and space. In the end, they can be dead because of starvation. Next, the professor insists that they can prevent the spread of disease by making several habitats and visiting there regularly to examine their status. Then they can remove it when they find infected entities. This counter the reading passage's assertion that some reptiles are easy to carry pathogen to the new habitat. Usually new habitat's entities are weak at the pathogen because they are never exposed to the pathogen. Finally, the professor argues that there are some methods to resolve problems when the reptiles captured. when they put some water in the bottomeof basket, it would be helpful to prevent dehydration. and avoiding birds attack, they also can put defensive cover to hide them. This rebutes the reading passage's suggestion that birds and small animals eat reptiles which caught in the basket. They also could be dead because of lack of water in the bowl. Good: 24~30 점수: 26 대채로 서로 다른 리딩과 리스닝을 적절하게 잘 비교하였습니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 것은 얼마나 적절하게 잘 비교하였나 입니다. 각 바디에 따라서 적절한 정보가 들어간 부분이 있고 아닌 부분 도 있습니다. 따라서 각 바디에서 적절하게 비교하는 것이 좋을 거 같습니다. 두 번째 바디처럼 한 쪽 부분에 너무 정보를 넣는 것 보다 둘 다 공평하게 넣는 것이 좋을 거 같습니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |