Topic: Over-the-counter medication should be regulated by the government. What is your opinion? |
One of famous world stars, Heath Ledger, died a few weeks ago. People considered it was a suicide at first, but it was proved that the direct reason of his death is overdose of medicine. After his death, people are arguing about the danger of over-the-counter medication. There are many reasons why over-the-counter medication should be regulated by the government. The government has to protect its people from any possible dangers. Over-the-counter medication can’t solve people’s underlying problems. It makes people’s situation worse, instead. First of all, the government has a responsibility to make its people safe. It has to save its people when they fall in dangerous situation. It is the very reason why the state and government exist. If over-the-counter medication has any dangers, the government should regulate it for its people’s safety. Over-the-counter medication can’t solve people’s underlying problems. It can make people feel better, sleep well or relax at the moment, but it can’t be a fundamental treatment. The government ought to regulate it and recommend prescribed medication for dealing with underlying problems successfully. Over-the-counter medication makes people’s situation worse. People can get medicine too easily and they might have too much medicine. Too much medicine makes people develop resistance, then people more and more medicine. It is a vicious circle. Furthermore there is an extreme result in the end of the circle. There is no doubt that it is death. Too much medicine from over-the-counter medication is far from treatment, it is ushering people into the death even right now. For all these above reasons it is clear that over-the-counter medication should be regulated by the government. It is natural duty of government, helps people who have difficulties in their lives deal with their problems fundamentally, prevent their situation from being worse.
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