some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. |
A plenty of people prefer to live in a big city for their active life. They want to associate with many others in big cities, also they think that there are a lot of opportunities to rise the quility of their life. However I am in favor of live in a small town. Living a rural area would be comfortable and happy to me I believe >> in my perspective or 앞에 써주심이 좋을거 같아요 구어체로 쓰이는 건 봤는데.. 문어체에선 못본거 같네요. Also, citizens in a big city are having competitive mind, so if I live in a city, I would be hard to live with people who care only about their own bussiness. I want to make nice freinds with having ( 생략) good personality in the countryside.
Firstly,a rural environmant is definetely clear ,compared with a urban area. It has beautiful nature, >> such as clear water, and fresh air. The environmaltal circumstance would make my feeling comfortable and enjoyable I think. Also, I do not want to get a dirty air and polluted water existing in big city. They would be(생략) give the negative effect to my health. Some chemical products which leasing ?? >> are made in the(생략) factories and companyies are harmful to many other people including me.
글을 쓰실때 문단의 맨 앞에는 주제를 쓰시는게 좋습니다. 이 문단에서는 님의 주장인 "시골에 사는 것이 내 건강에 더 좋은것 같다. " 라는 주제를 맨 앞에 그리고 다음에 왜 건강에 좋은지에 대한 이유인 시골보다 도시에서 건강에 좋지 않은 유독 물질이 더 많다. 를 쓰시고요. 그리고 나서 예를 쓰시는 것이 좋습니다. 문단을 창의적으로 쓰는 것도 중요하지만 논리적 흐름을 따르는 것도 중요 하답니다.
In addition, a big city is strongly competitive society. There are various people who try to get their own profit. As time goes by, people are getting more selfish, and thinking themselves. So people who live in an apartment in the big city are(생략) do not know each others. I watched a news about one old woman living in an apartment. She lived alone and died in her house, but nobody did not notice >> aware of ( 알린게 아니라 아는 거죠) it. That's because they did not care about their nieghbors. I do not want to live in this area such like a dry desert. In a small town, I can feel humanity and love with neighbors. Also, they like to share their feelings and many other things to feel humanity.
On top of that, some people say that living in a big city gives many advantages for them, but I do not agree with that oppinion. If I live in a small town, I would be comfortable with it's clear environment. In addition, I want to live with rural area's people who having pure mind and loving to share many things such as the love, foods, or the hands of help. Thus, considering all these facts, I want to live in rural area. |