Being happy with a job is more important than having a high salary |
Opinions are divided over whether being happy with a job is more important than having a high salary. Personally, I agree with the above statement for the following reasons. First, happiness is important condition rather than money in our lives. Besides, people usually can do well when they do things they enjoy. First and foremost, happiness is the most critical issue for most of people. Many people regard earning lots of money as their primary goal, because they think that money is essential for happy lives. However, money could not be ultimate goal in our lives, since it is only one of the conditions to be happy. According to a research from Korean labor research center, the average time people spend time in their work is about 11 hours. If we recognize the fact that we spend only 6 hours in home except for sleeping hours, the time spent in work is very crucial in our lives. It demonstrates that if we are not happy with our work, it is hard to say that our lives are happy. Given this, happiness in work is more critical than high salaries. In addition, people who enjoy their working can get better achievement than other people. It means that they can get high salaries eventually. Take my personal example. 6 years ago, I had worked in Research Company. Even though I did not enjoy researching, I chose the company since the company guaranteed higher salaries than other companies. However, I could not achieve well in there, and I failed to promote eventually. After that, I moved to advertising company, which I hoped to enter so long. Although the salary, the company gives me at first, was low, I did well in there because I enjoyed making advertisement. After 1 year, I could promote earlier than other colleagues at work, and I got higher salary which is even higher than the salary of researching company. In this regard, if we enjoy a job, we can earn lots of money, too. To conclude, enjoying the job is more important than high salaries. The whole life can be happy with happy working, and people can do well and earn more money when they enjoy working. Therefore, people should be required to choose the job they enjoy. |
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