■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to suceed, it is better to be more like others than to be different from others. | |
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Some people may say that it is more beneficial to be like others to be successful in the society. What I think, however, is that it is a lot easier and faster to succeed if you become distinguishable from other for following reasons. First of all, there are a variety of requirements and preferences being created in the current society and you need to fulfill them in order to succeed. Second, it is very difficult to compete others being similar to them.
To begin with, it is so much easier to compete others and be successful if we are different from others. This is because it is harder to be better than others under same condition in this world where such a fierce competition is going on. To be specific, many university graduates in my country are pressed for time preparing for their jobs. It is very common for them to spend most of their time on studying for their majors and sharpening extra skills such as language and computer skills. Since they think they need to be the top of the others on the same qualification, it is very demanding and time-consuming for them to succeed. Yet, if they try to be not like others and rather different from others, they will be walking on the path of success. For example, one of my friends is not running an online-shopping mall. She, however, didn't intend to launch an online business at the first time. She was going to a normal offline shop instead. But, she predicted it would be really hard for to make some profit out of it because there already were plenty of shops just like what she was planning to open, so she stopped designing an offline shop and initiated an online shop, and she is now very satisfied with her decision of the moment. This clearly demonstrates the need of being creativity to succeed in the society.
Moreover, no one could raise an objection to the statement that there are many different from and type of desire in the world. As techniques are developed, preference of mankind has varied. This is where the need of creativity comes in. For instance, to meet this wide range of demand, numerous mp3 player companies are struggling to come up with more diverse products with different features, functions, and design. If they release only one type of mp3 player, they will probably be in a danger of bankrupt because customers would not buy their items. Furthermore, companies also look for creative applicants due to such condition of market. Therefore, in order for job-seekers to get a job, they should be outstanding among others and distinguishable from others to employers. So it makes sense that we all need to be different from others to be successful in the society.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people are required to be creative and different from others in order to be self-satisfied in the future for following two reasons; first, it is harder to compete others with similar qualification these days; second, you are required to meet very varied desires and preference in order to be successful. | |
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