Knowing how to read and write is more important than experiencing |
It is debatable whether reading and writing skills (are) more importan(t) than experiencing. Some people say that experiencing is more significant because (it is) more impressive and realistic to learn what people want to obtain. However, I am against the idea that experiences offer us a lot of merits.(무슨말인지ㅠㅠ..> since the ability to read us requisite for obtaining information and capability to write is more important for communication in the global age.) (To begin with, the ability to read is required obtaining information. We are using the Internet and then can access on the web-sites page. The way to use the Internet is not first-hands experience but reading the web-site pages. To illustrate my point, this is the best example of (the생략) Internet shopping.(약간다른주제라는기분이랄까요 ? 인터넷을설명하는것같은....) I (am생략) utilize(생략ing) the Internet to buy what I want to buy. I don’t need to go to the store since I can choose the product (by means of using <맞을수도 제가 어휘가딸려서 ㄷㄷ;) on the Internet (so보단 hence 이런게쫌더어울리는듯) I can instantly purchase the product. Therefore, I think that having more (importance is생략) reading skills (are more important) than experienc(ing). Moreover, capability to write for communication in the worldwide is more essential than first-hands experiences. Moreover,it is essential to communicate in the world with the capability to write. When we first visit a foreign country, we (is생략) requisite writing competence for communicating (with)the foreigners in the country. This is because the competence can demonstrate correctly our (thinks.x thoughts) and minds. For instance, my brother (would go usually생략)(often goes) to study aboard. He said that when he first visited a country, he was afraid due to the ability to speak. But, he had writing skills so (he was able to) communicate with the foreigners. Besides, it was more (exact to express for his minds생략 helpful in expressing his mind). As a result, I agree that knowing reading and writing competence is more essential than experiencing( first-hand activities.<이게모져?잘몰라서..여튼없어도되는듯) In summary, I strongly believe that we need to know how to read and write (is 생략)more significant(ly) ( 이부분에쓰신거 몬가쪽금이상해서 지워버렸어염 ..........잘안이어지는듯~?.....significantly 저부분과이어지게끔다시해보세용...................................한번확인해보세유 ㅠㅠ)So I agree the (statement writing and reading skills outweight experiencing.
제자신도그렇게영어를잘하는게아니라;..좀안습이네요 여튼 한번고쳐봐드렸어요 도움이됫음좋겟는데 ㅠㅠ;.
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