■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Borrowing money from friends damage friendship. | |
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Have you ever heard that a friend abandon her friend because her friend did not lend money? I have never heard that kind of story, but have heard that two friends' relationship ended because a friend did not pay back money. Therefore, borrowing money from friends definitely can destroy friendship for two reasons ; borrowed money makes friends stop talking and lose trust between two friends.
First of all. friends will hardly talk joyfully as long as a friend pays back to her friends. For example, I lent some money when my friend and I bought a present for our friend. However, my friend did not call me for a long time although we talked at least twice a week before I lent money. For one month, I thought she might not have enough money so far and waited for her calls. Yet, as time goes by, I assumed that she did not want to pay back. Although I felt bad, I still could not call her, because I did not want to confront the awkward conversation with one of my close friend.
Secondly, people become distrustful towards their friends after they help their friends financially and experience friends' not paying back the money on the exact time. Lending money is rooted on strong friendship. However, when people are disgusted by their friends one time, it is hard to regain deep friendship. People would recognize friends' annoying habit that were covered with friends' good personalities. Besides the worst thing is that once seeing friends' misbehavior, people would be disappointed more and more. Consequently, friendship will be ruined.
I do not want to lose any of my cool friends. Thus, I never lend money to my friends because I can look on my friends with jaundiced eyes. I suggest people should not help their friends financially, and would rather find alternative way to solve problems, unless you want to end friendship. | |
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