■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : People should carefully plan activities for their free time. | |
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Due to their busy lives filled with schedule, people usually make plan for entire day, even for the free time. Those who enjoy their leisure time without careful consideration is regarded less prudent and unreliable. However, spontaneous activities lead to more adventurous time and choosing what people really want. Therefore, how to spend given leisure time should not be planned.
To start with, it is more intriguing and fun to spend time spontaneously rather than planning every details. While it can be dangerous and scary, people can get pleasure from unexpected incidents and even prolong the period of activities they enjoy doing without any interference. For example, my sister once went on a trip to New Zealand without travel guides who would set all the plans for her. She was excited with what will face her during a trip. The best time of her leisure time was in farm. When the farm owner who became a friend in a restaurant unexpectedly invited her to his farm, she agreed without a second thought. She spent an entire day shaving sheep and enjoying activities she might not have been able to do if she planned her trip completely. This example clearly shows that people anticipate for upcoming events when they do not have things settled down.
Moreover, instant activities allow you to choose the option you want the most. On the other hand, taking time to plan makes you consider conditions too much such as benefits, cost, efficiency, and time. For example, on last vacation, I was virtually glued to my desk trying to look for best option. First, I wanted to go shopping but I decided that it costs too much. Then, taking a trip to Hawaii seemed like a desirable choice. However, I thought it might take too long. After taking almost 10 different choices into consideration, I gave up and spent my entire holiday at home. Consequently, planning hindered me from decided the best option for me.
In brief, making a plan for your free time gives you hardship rather than benefits. You can neither enjoy thrilling time nor spend time in most appealing way. | |
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