Some people say that it is better to learn by oneself without any others' help (supporters) because they could concentrate better on their study without any interference. However, I strongly believe that a teacher is necessary for learning. The rationale behind this (thinking) is that people can efficiently manage their strength advantages and weakness and (effectively) study effectively through a teacher.
*부사보다는 동사가 먼저 쓰면 강한 인상을줄 수 있습니다.
First of all, teachers help to fortify students' advantages and make up (for) disadvantages. Individuals have their own strong points and shortcomings different from other people. However, it is limited and difficult for them to find out all of their strength and weak points. So, it is necessary to need some supporters to seek/find/look for such things with them, such as teachers and friends. In my case, when I was in high school, I was not good at a language class. At that time, I thought the reason was that I was poor in reading quickly (had shortage skills to read quickly). So, I only focused on tried to improving it only the ability, but I could not have as good grades in the language class as I expected. At that time However, my teacher's gave an advice that my problem is to understand the text not to read it fast and it helped me to get high grade. which is that the problem of me is understanding, not the speed reading rapidly, was able to have positive effects on my grades. So, if there was no had been the teacher's aid/help/assistance, it could be have been difficult to recognize my weakness. Thus, this is a clear indication for why it is better to learn with a teacher.
In addition, learning with a teacher is effective for study. Generally, students could learn easily and quickly through teachers' explanation. On the other hand, without teachers lecture, it would take more time to understand and study something. 1. Especially, in the case which they should solve some problems impossible to settle by themselves, they could waste much time with keeping the problems for a long time. According to a report released by the Ministry of Education and Human Resources Department in Korea, about 74% of the number of students have one or several private lessons. This tendency in which they prefer private lessons shows they can learn better by attending extracurricular work rather than learning by themselves. Also, the students say that they could learn more easily and quickly through teachers. Therefore, this evidently indicates how a teacher is helpful for learning.
1. much time 이나 long time 은 같은 표현이므로 반복을 피하셔야합니다. Especially, it might take long time to finish when students should answer the questions which are too difficult to solve themselves.
In conclusion, I wholeheartedly think that having teachers has positive effects on learning. The reasons are not only that teachers help to reinforce strong points and supplement weak points but also that it is possible to learn effectively through them.
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