In this age of competition, numerous Many peole choose their job based on the focusing on their salary rate, regardless of their interest/passion concern. some day, they found themselves being stuck in hard hectic daily schedule and dread going to work. dreading going to the job. In this regard, (콤마 잊지마세요~!) I firmly believe that people should study what they like. the subject which they are interested in. For one, This is because, they can found the enjoyness joy of study (studying) when they learn. Additionally, Better job will be easily followed available as long as people enjoy studying.
(study what they want 해야하는 이유로 joy of studying 을 찾는다는 이유 보다는 passionate 해질수 있다는 것이 더 좋을것같아요^^
그리고, 문법 실수 주의해주세요~! 또, 문장 중간에 갑자기 대문자로 시작하셨는데, 문장 첫 글자만 대문자로 받고, 지명이나 이름이 아닐 경우에는 모두 소문자로 써주세요)
First of all, we enjoy the object (subject?) through by studying what we are passionate about. To be specific, The main purpose of studying is acquiring to acquire knowledge, of course, but to enjoy the feeling of studying hard. Take my case as an example, For example, I was always interested in mechanics since I was young, so when I entered the collage, I made up my mind firmly decided to major in be (or go into mechanics) mechanic engineering. After I entered, I found out that studying this was so happy for me I had such interest and passion for this that I usually forget time while I'm studying my specialization (specialization?) (문장의 끝에는 마침표 찍어주셔야죠~!) Moreover, I participated in the major tournament (WHAT 토너먼트? specify 해주세요!) as one of the member in the group on behalf of my university. As my experience have shown, studying what students are interested in enables them by studying my favorable subject, I was able to acquire not only intelligence of specific subject, mechanic, but also the joy of learning/studying. (마침표 잊지마세요~) enjoyment of learning
What's more, People Students can easily get better jobs easily if they study fervently; which means, What I mean is that people who study their interests should be able to will get better ramification, because they put more effort into their study rather than one those who merely study (regardless of/without any interest) it to get better job discounting their interests. To take a personal example, For instance, My sister, (콤마!!) who is good at study (~ing 여야죠!) decided to enter the a collage which is well-known for its business program, under my parents' pressure. (문장이 길어지니까 끊는게 좋습니다.) Therefore, but she had always told me that there was no incentives/motivation in studying business. studying busieness gave no interesting to her. Abruptly, she changed her major to design when she have taken fabric design courses saying " I found desingning is very enjoyable for me". Naturally , Ultimately, she was able to achieve her dream as a desinger. If it were not for founding intresting , she could not have been able to become a famous designer, if she stayed ~. In this respect, choosing major without considering their intrests is not a good choice for people.
To sum up, I strongly believe that selecting the study in one's own interest is more important than any other factor. This is because people could acquire the sense of enjoyment from them also result in getting better job. |