▶ Your Answer :
In the reading, the author argues that
there are plausible theories how deer use their antlers. However, the professor
in the lecture claims that the theories are not proved by providing several
reasons.
To begin with, the professor contends that deer
do not use the antlers for mating to mate. Male deer use a variety of other methods
such as vocalization and body pasture. Also, female deer often choose male deer
with small antlers even though there are deer that have bigger one. This counters
the author’s claim that a major role of antlers is attracting to attract mates by
defeating competitors.
In addition, the lecturer argues that antlers
are not used to indicate territory. Deer emit smell to prevent their territory
from other deer, and the it is easily recognized by others easily recognized by others. In addition, deer
rub their antlers to remove soft outer skin of these. This challenges the
reading’s assertion that deer use their antlers to reveal their territory by
marking on trees.
Finally, the professor claims that deer do
not use antlers for fighting to fight. Although deer need measures for defense to defense winter,
in which they are the mostly vulnerable, the antlers is shed in the season.
Also, females do not utilize antlers even though they need it to protect offspring. This
casts doubt on the author’s point that antlers allow deer to defend themselves
against predators by sweeping their antlers. Good: 24~30 점수: 24 대채로 서로 다른 정보를 가진 리딩과 리스닝을 적절하게 잘 비교하였습니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분은 리딩과 리스닝을 얼마나 잘 적절하게 비교했냐입니다. 제가 리딩과 리스닝을 다 본것이 아니기 때문에 혹시 빠진 부분이 있으면 더 넣어주시길 바랍니다. 아쉬운 부분은 리딩에 대한 정보가 리스닝과 비교했을 때 빈약합니다. 한 문장으로 서술하는 것 보다는, 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 리딩의 정보를 더 넣어주시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |