▶ Your Answer :Without doubt, many people are is wondering about what they should do in their free time. Some people might think that it is better to learn practical skills, while others do not believe this way. If It were up to me, I would say that I prefer to do leisure in my free time instead of learning practical skills.
The first reason is that people can be productive by doing leisure. These days, people really don't have much time to rest or relieve since they have lots of works to do. For example, students have their homework assignments and workers have their tasks to solve quickly. However, if they do leisure such as surfing, camping or climbing, they can become more productive. Various kinds of leisure activities leads their brain to relax and make people more effeciency of to do work more efficiently. So, when they come back to their workplace or school, they will become creative or productive. For example, I have a friend who is working as a business man in a big company. He has a lot of works to do and those make him depressed. He could not work well and he could not put efforts anymore. After that, he did many leisure activities in his vacation. He felt like he became a new person. He could work hard again by doing leisure in his free time. He realized that people should do leisure activity at least 3 times a week.
The second reason is that leisure activities are fun especially when doing with friends or families. As I mentioned above, people in this modern society do not have much time to rest. It means that they also do not have much time to spend quality times with their families, friends, or loved ones. So, doing leisure activities together will must be helpful for all those people. A study which was conducted by the University of Texas shows that doing leisure activities with someone is are much better for everyone than doing them alone. They could provide a tight connection among between not only families, but also friends or lovers, too.
To sum up, doing leisure activities in free time is helpful for people since it makes people to be productive in workplace or school and gives strong bonds which can make families closer to each other. In this regard, I prefer to do leisure activities in my free time to learning practical skills
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