학생이 안에서 하는 공부가 효율적일 수 있는가 밖에서 하는 공부가 효율적일 수 있는가? |
Study is very important and useful. Human's abilities such as social abilities, using tool, intelligence, and so on(기타 라는 뜻입니다). are better than other mammals( other 뒤에 나오는 명사는 복수 입니다. 그리고 그냥 animals 가 좋을꺼 같습니다.) (and other animal). That's reason is that human being can think and behavior differently from them. Many thoughts and behaviors come from study. So, study is most important for human being.
The meaning of "study" often is inside study. Sometimes people think most important part is inside study. For instance, study in class. But, Outside activity is more than inside. Why? That's two major reason. First of all, outside study is possible to many experience. Humans were got the many experience from many activity. For example, sport, worship, travel, friendship, and love. That's part aren't accesses inside study. In my opinion, activity is not a text. Activity write by text is possible. But, Text write by activity is impossible. Second, Maybe people feel the funny and pleasure, there learning ability will the larger and the larger. Outside study more than pleasure inside part. For example, In my case, In the highschool my class teacher's lecture is very fun. That teacher's subject is Korean language. He class time, all the class student become activity. And my grade is A. In conclusion, study is most important in human life. Because, human live in social, very important thing is ability each person. That ability grow to study. People make feel happy, and outside study with experience, which study is not boring study. For these reason, I consider outside study is more than effect inside study. |
저 학원도 한번 다녀본적 없는 생초보입니다.
6월 7일 시험인데 지금껏 리스닝 리딩도 못해서 거기에만 매여 있느라 스피킹, 라이팅은 공부한 기억이 전무하네요.
그나마 스피킹은 템플릿 대로 연습은 하는데 라이팅은 정말.. 그야말로 안습이네요.ㅠㅠ
제 실력이 오르길 바라지는 않습니다. 5일해서 무엇이 오를까요 과연..
하지만 제 수준이 어느 정도인가를 미리 알고 싶은 마음은 있습니다. 정말 테러와 같은 제 작문이겠지만 솔직히 평가해 주세요. 300자도 못넘기겠네요..ㅜㅜ
욕설도 감수하겠습니다. 낮은 자세로..ㅠㅠ 부탁드립니다.