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Some students like to take distance-learning courses by computer. Other students prefer to study in traditional classroom settings with a teacher. Consider the advantages of both options, and make an argument for the way that students should organize their schedules.
Today that a high technology of computer has been developed, we have one more option to take a class as well as a traditional way: distance-learning course. Both options have advantages. Distance-learning is not limited by time and space; therefore, it offers more chances to study to students. On the contrary, taking classes with a traditional way has limitations in terms of time and space; however, it is still the best way to communicate and debate with classmates. Therefore, when students build up their schedule, mixing two ways properly should be recommended.
Since distance-learning can be used anywhere and anytime, it provides more opportunities to study for students. There are various kinds of students: one who has kids, another one who has to work as well as study, the other one who lives far away from school, and so on. Every single student has each different situation and, sometimes it might disturb their study with a traditional way. However, using distance-learning system, all of these students are able to study without difficulty. They have the same opportunity with students who are able to study in the classroom all day long. Therefore, distance-learning system mollifies the divide of opportunities for study between students. This is why the Korean government establishes ‘Cyber University of Korea.’
Nevertheless, distance-learning system has one serious imperfection: it is impossible to debate and communicate with others when using this way. Studying in traditional classroom solves this problem. It enhances the most important ability for students: the capacity of communication and debate. The ability to communicate with others and debate about specific topics is definitely required in the current society whatever students will do after graduation. Even though we are able to communicate and debate with others by using computer camera, headset, and microphone, it is definitely true that the debate through computer monitor will not going to be smooth, since students have the difficulty to perceive the concrete situation and retort each other quickly.
In summary, each way to study has its own remarkable advantage. Therefore, students need to make a schedule for their study using both ways in wise. There are several examples: studying in traditional classroom during the semester and taking web courses during vacation, using distance-learning system at the working place when working and going to school after work, and so on. Today, comparing previous days, more options to study exist for more students. The only one thing we have to do is making a wise choice. The wiser choice is, the more intelligent we will be.
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