■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Do you agree or disagree with the follwing statement? Childhood is the most
important period of a person's life.Use specific reasons and examples to support
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It is debatable whether childhood is the most important period of a person's life. some people say that adulthood is more important than childhood because they should take care of a lot of things such as business and family affairs. So some people spend their childhood just enjoying. But I strongly believe that childhood is very important in one's life because we can have many experiences at that time and it is the time for one to get to know their identity.
Firstly, people can have a lot of experience in their childhod. There are so many tings that children can get. sometimes when we walk by the playground, children are playing with many stuffs. They get together catching insects, trying to know what they are. Also, they can go to the classic concert with their parents. As I said above, they learn biology by looking at some insects and learn music by going to the concerts. It will improve one's ability to take knowledge. Like this, one can learn the subject by seeing and experiencing.
Another reason is that people usually get to know their identity at their young age. Children around 7 - 10, they start to go to the preschool, By learning how to interact with others, they started to understand how to get along with others. At the same time, they might curious about themselves. For example, a child who has a younger brotherwent to the preschool one day. He learned from his teacher that we should take care of young babies because they are more weak and can'y say what they want. So, when he came back home, he knew that he has aresponsibility to take care of his younger brother. He look after him ever since he learned it. As we see this example, one's iedntity and characteristic can be formed in their childhood.
To sum up, It is very important to spend their childhood well because it is a epotomize of what we are going to be. So we should keep in mind that childhood is most important period in one' lfe. (and think about how our childhood was)
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