It is more important that people spend their time at working place than with their families. |
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There might be different opinions on whether it is more critical that people spend their time at working place than with their families. Some people think that spending time with their family member in that they feel comfortabled. However I firmly believe that it is helpful for people to spend time at working place becasue they can earn a lot of money and make social network.
To begin with, working place offers workers to obtain money which they need to live. Let's assume that if she or he have not sufficient money, they could feel uncomfortabled and uneasiness. Also money make people to do activities which they want. For example, there are to buy clothings, eat dilicius foods, go to picnic and so on. In this sense, earning money at working place is necessary for people. For example, In my case, I am earning money throught working. Even thought I have not a lot of money, I can spend money enjoying with my families and friends. If I did not have money, I would not enjoy with. As my experience illustrated, obtaining money at working place is better than spending with family member.
In addition, people are able to improve social networking through working locale. By taking time with other workers, natually they would make a friends and feel friendship with them. This allows them have social network which is important factor in social live. Accoroing to the a study recently released by the Korean National Reserach Center, more than two thirds of the serveyed top managers in big companies reponded that social networking is the most critical factor for their achievement. This shows that spendng time at working place is better since they can have oppornutinies to make social network.
In conclusion, spending time at working place is more beneficial for people than with their family. Not only do people recieve money but also they make social network.
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