You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice. |
With an amazing advance in transportation and communication, the world is becoming smaller than ever. As bars that had protected nations from other nations collapse, it became important for people of the 21st century to understand and accept factors of other cultures.무엇을 의미하는지 잘 모르겠네요,, In this circumstance, I would like to go to China because it has great potential and culture that was <여전히 맞는 사실이니까 is 로 써야 하지 않을까요?>the basis of Asian culture.
To begin with, I would like to travel China because it is one of the BRICs, the countries that are showing the greatest potential. After the Chinese government opened their<어떤 의미에서 their을 쓰셧는지,, 잘모르겠음,,> market, more and more companies have built numerous factories allured< being allured 으로 고쳐야 할지도,,> by China's cheap labor. Due to these companies, China's rate of economical development has never decreased under 10% since 2004. Now, it is hard to find a single merchandise that is not labeled 'made in China'. With upcoming Olympic, it seems obvious that China will leap one more time.<글을 읽는데 방해가 되요 삭제하는게 좋을듯요,,> If I travel this country, then I will be able to feel the great potential of the country that Napoleon called 'sleeping lion'. While visiting the country, I will be able to observe China's great advance with my own eyes, and these vivid experiences will last long and keep me awake. So, I would choose China as my special country to travel without hesitation.
In addition, traveling China is attractive because its culture is a basis of the Asian culture. That is, since a power of a country depended on that of military forces, China was the strongest country in Asia with its numerous soldiers. With their mighty power, they were able to build rich and advanced culture which countries around it observed and modified it to something else.
In conclusion, I would visit China since it shows great potential of growth. Also, traveling there will allow the understanding of most Asian countries. As the world is becoming smaller and smaller, the stage for people is no longer limited in their own countries. To survive in this big market, the world, understanding the cultures and observing the potential of growing countries are necessary.<요기서 한번더 그러므로 china를 여행하고 싶다 라고 언급하는게 좋지 않을까요,,ㄱ-
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