Me as a bridegroom |
학교 영작문시간에 나온 주제인데 한번 써보았습니다. 교수님이 그러시길 시제와 아티클쪽에 문제가 많다고 그러던데, 몇개 제 눈에 보이기는 하는데 맞는지 아닌지 확신을 못하겠군요. 영작문 고수님들의 의견 또는 지적 부탁 드립니다.
Me as a bridegroom
When it comes to speaking of the best groom, almost everyone would first come up with several conditions such as good job, ability, personality, or even appearance. I cannot be an exception if I have to evaluate myself as a groom. According to “the common standard”, the qualities for marriage that most of the people look into, I think it is safe to say that I am ready to become a someone’s good husband for the reasons of following: bright future, good impression, and likable personality. I have my own blueprint for the future. I have made a lot mistakes to become what I am today. Once I wasted a lot of time having fun and drinking. Also I dated with a plenty of girls, when I was younger. Looking back those time when I was mentally immature, I have taken some time to think about my future, about my dream, and about my family in Second, I am good-looking. Some might deny it. However, I do not mean that I am so handsome that every girl likes me. What I mean by is that I have a comfortable and likable looking which has something to do with good impression. Appearance can be a very important condition for marriage as well just like the other qualities such as ability and background. Marriage consultant can be a good example of it. At the beginning of signing up, the consultant requires pictures from the members obligatorily. The pictures collected play a very important role for the members to choose their dates. Besides, once we make a choice for marriage, it is the thing that we have to keep for good. So, choosing your type of appearance is significant for marriage. Above all things, it is particularly important to find someone who has good nature and personality since we have to communicate with our partners most of our life spending time together. I do not have the best kind of personality. I have a lot of faults. However, I have good qualities as well which make me a good groom. I always listen to people. So, if there was a problem in my family, I would have a conversation and try to solve the problem with words rather than let it go. At the same time, I am a family man. I am ready to become someone’s good husband and my children’s good father. Many Korean men are not family oriented because of their busy works and frequent eat-out with their coworkers and supervisors. For me, my priority is my family. I distinguish my work and my family. Especially for Koreans, this makes me a special groom. Marriage is not all about conditions. It is a sacred promise between two loving people. However, in order to maintain a satisfactory marriage, it seems unavoidable to consider what the person has got. As I mentioned above, someone’s potential ability, good appearance, and personality can be the essential options that we have to take a look at for marriage. For these, I think I have proved myself enough as a good bridegroom in the essay. |