Q: Koreans spend a lot of time studying English, but still get low scores in English proficiency tests. Foreign companies pick
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As the world is globalizing,(또는,In the age of globalization,) more and more people realize the need to learn English for interacting with people around the world, (English became a crucial language to communicate and interact with others around the world..) and it there is no exception for Koreans. Koreans spend a lot of time and money learning English. However,
Therefore, it is obvious that Koreans must check out and modify the way in which they learn English.
First of all, (Koreans tend to focus on theory instead of practicality. In other words,~)
Koreans concentrate on English grammar and reading comprehension very much rather than writing or communication skills.. That’s why they keep getting poor scores in writing and speaking tests of English proficiency tests including the IELTS, and go through a hard time working with foreign companies. The most important purpose of a language is communication.
If we learned a new language, we should use it in our real life. But Koreans get used to study English rather than use the language, lacking communication skills....blablabla...
The purpose of learning a language is to be able to use it in real life. To put that into practice, it’s important to develop all four parts( what are four parst? speaking,listening, writing, reading? if you mean those, specify them!..) equally.
Secondly, Korean students receive only one-level English education ??>>Korean education system is not flexible enough to teach all different students with different english levels...., which usually focuses on average-level students, at school. As a result, upper-level students get dissatisfied look for private education, and lower-level students find classes hard to follow, and, eventually, lose interest in English.
One of Koreans' characteristics is that they are always in hurry...It implies to the studying style as well... Lastly, many Koreans want to master English in a short period of time. For instance, there are a lot of people asking for help how to improve their English ability fast on Internet boards. But English is not a thing that can be crammed. It takes a long time for people to learn a language, even their own native languages.
Preference of grammar and reading comprehension, taking English lectures regardless of each one’s own level, and hastiness are certainly not the things for Koreans learning English. They need to deeply think about the problems and how to improve English ability.
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