■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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Some people are good at cooking, but, others are not excellent cooks. Nowadays preparing food has become easier than that of past times. Becuase this change has given us more leisure time and has lessened housewives' daily cooking burdens, I believe that this change has many positive effects in modern people's lives.
We can find many instant foods in grocery stores. These foods make housewives prepare meals in a short times. So, they can enjoy more leisure time and spend more time with family members. For example, one housewife hurries to prepare dinner. But she can solve this problem by using some instant foods. Then, she can have more time with her husband and son, all of them are happy.
Preparing meal in convenient ways allows people to have more chances to make new friends. For instance, as my wife doesn't get much stress from holding small parties with foods, I can invite people into my home frequently. This gives our family more friends.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that modern ways of preparing food have improved the way people live. Nowdays, most people don't have much time that they can share with their families and neighbors. Preparing meal is a basic and routine job. People can enjoy thier lives more efficiently and freely by making the job easier than before.
이거 제가 쓴 영어 에세이 인데요, 지금 세어보니까 글자수는 248자 네요.
우선 이거 점수 주신다면 몇점 정도 받을수 있을까요? (30점 만점에~)
아 그리고 이정도 수준이면 상중하 중에 어디에 속할까요 ??????
그리고 제가 글에서 사용한 예가 적절한지 적절하지 않은지 설명도 좀 부탁드립니다. ^^
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