■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : It is more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. | |
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Some people think that ability to work independently is important in order to survive in a competitive society. However, I strongly believe that ability to work as a member of a tream is more important because through working as a team, people can increase productivity and make more creative outcomes.
First of all, productivity can increase when people work together. There is no single task which needs only one ability. This means that even though one person work independently, he or she has to utilize various kinds of skills. However, it is difficult for someone to be proficient in diverse fields while it is easy to find someone who has one of those skills. Therefore, when people work together on a team, all the skills can be utilized efficiently to gain one common accompishment. Also, people can reach the goal faster than when working independently because several people do different tasks at the same time.
It is also considerable to note that people can make more creative outcomes when working on a team. All people have their own ways of thinking. Because these logical rationales have been established for their entire lives, it is difficult to think differently from these rigid ways. This is why many people want to listen to opinions from others or to get advice from professional consultants by paying huge amount of money when they are stuck in a serivous trouble. In contrast, a team consists of various kinds of people, and this means that it can utilize different logical thinkings and can reach unexpected conculsions by combining different ideas.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that it is more important to be able to work on a team than to work independently because this system of working is more productive and creative.
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