Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to be aware of events occurring around the world and not just in your own country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. |
Many people think there are no relation between the events that were happened in the foreign country and us. Also many people acclaim that there are direct or even indirect relation with our country. I strongly believe that the events that were happened should be known for several reasons. The first of all, the world has become more smaller because of the transportation and telecommunication development. That means the events of foreingers should affect us even there are far from us. There are some examples about this concept. First, when SARS outbroke in China, many countries include Korea had to be aware of this news. People who traveled to China could spread the disease to foreign countries even are located over the ocean by the way of air-plane. Second example is about the outbreak of the disease that is occured to the cows in U.S. So for the people who eat American meat had to be aware of it. The second, people, who work abroad, are increasing. Person, who has the citizenship of Korean could work in New York for business, should know the information of New York and the issues of the location where the person is going to live. Also people who work abroad for the same companies where he or she worked in his or her own countries are increasing. For my uncle he worked for Samsung in Suwon, Korea for several years ago, but now he works for Samsung is Shanghai in China. This type of people should know abundunt information and events that is related to the foreign countries. The third, many tests and interviews for entering the companies or the universities required ample knowledge and issues of other countries. They may ask the affect of SARS and the impact of the Iraq War in the test. Employers or the teachers try to choose interviewees with abundant information which is required to interact with the certain problems. To sum up, it is very essential for people to know the events happening around the world, or in the foreign countries for the reasons; globalization of the world, increase of population of working abroad. |
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