■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Save the money or spend right away. | |
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" Easy earned, easy go" was stressed when the economy was bad in Korea. Even though I agree that we should spend money for our economy growth, I personally assert that we should save moeny for the unpredictable future. Saving money not only can give us to get chance to prepare for the future and focus on the work with comfortable mind.
In the beginning of that, since we are living in the middle of materialism society, we need to save money for the future for better life. As the average life span is getting longer than before, silver ages are now increasing compared to infinite hopital facilities. It means without the money we might not get the benefit of the facility when we are old. According to the national statistics, in recent, 10 % of the silver ages cannot get adquate facilities, so they suffer from their sickness. Plus, according to the news, pension will be possibly depleted in 50 years, so we should not depend on the pension system that offered from country. In other words, without the personal savings, we may not get appropriate remedy for the future from our country. These points shows that the more money we save, the better our lives will be expected.
On top of that, saving money can help us to improve work efficency. It means we are able to concentrate on not moneny, but work. No one who worry about thier credit card fee or housing fee can focus on thier work. It makes people work ineffectively, absoultely causes people to frustrate. For example, one of my freinds always enjoy her life with spending her money without saving. But, the time before she has to pay for credit card fee or rent fee, she asks people for helping her out. No work produtivity as well as no concentration on work cannot be expected on her lifestyle. In this sense, I think saving money can help people to get confidence for thier lives, resulting in more productivity.
In conclusion, even though we have to spend some money for our healthy economy ,I think saving moneny has many benfits for my life. I can prepare for my unpreditable future and just focus on my work with confidence. Saving money will be my invaluable assets and power for my life. | |
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