▶ Your Answer :
In the reading passage, there is
ample support for the author's claim that college education is necessary for
preparation for the future. However, the professor in the lecture gives several
reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point.
First, the professor contends that
about half of people who has graduated graduated college are not employed, according to
research done in 2011. There are too many people who want to get same job. This
casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that a number of jobs require
college education.
Next, the professor insists that
graduating college does not really mean getting access to more technology in
their jobs. They might learn how to give presentations, but they would not be
able to fix the presentation device when it has a problem. This counters the
reading passage's assertion that college graduates could get higher quality
jobs that develop their valuous skills.
Finally, the professor argues that
salaries do not always depend on graduation of college. She gives some examples
such as bartenders and car sellers. This refutes the reading passage's
suggestion that higher education results in higher salaries than other jobs. Good; 24~30 점수: 24 대채로 서로 다른 정보를 가진 리딩과 리스닝을 적절하게 잘 비교하엿습니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 리딩과 리스닝을 잘 적절하게 배분하였나 입니다. 지금 이 에세 이에서 약간 아쉬운 부분은 전반적으로 내용면에 잇어서 리딩과 리스닝 둘 다 부족한 거 같습니다. 제가 리딩과 리스닝을 다 본 것이 아니기 때문에 혹 시 빠진 부분이 있으면 더 서술해주시길 바랍니 다 수고많으셨습니다. |