■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : It is always better to save money you earn rather than spend it right away. | |
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Many people tend to spend their money right away. Spending money right away has its advantages, however, I disagree with spending right away. Because saving money improves level of life in future, could be swelled as well as I can spend when I really want to.
First of all, saving money is a best way to prepare for the future life. Saved money is always useful in senior life when people get sick. In my personal experience, my grandmother saved money from 20 years old. And when she was 67 yeard old, she got sick. Although surgery was expensive, she could afford it by using saved money. It allowed my grandmother to survive and live longer. After surgery, she became healthy, and thanks to saving money.
Secondly, saved money allows people to use money immediatly. They could buy something expensive by using their deposits. For instance, I saved money from when I was young. At that time, I like to save money in the abstract: it was one of my habits. Last year, When I matriculated to junior highschool, I bought a up-to-date cellular phone by saved money.. Likewise, saved money is various when I really want to purchase something.
Lastly, saving money can be swelled. People deposit money into saving accounts or funds. Then, people could get a lot of interests. For example, as I mentioned, I saved money from childhood. During several years, my mom set portfolio to deposit funds and saving accounts at the same time. Finally, It swelled nearly doubled. I thanks to my mom that I became a rich.
In conclusion, saving money is much better than spending money. It allows people to prepare for the future, use when they really want to, and bubble. For these reasons, I think saved money makes life more worthwhile. | |
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