■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :it is better to grow up with siblings than without. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develope your essay | |
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Many people have different taste, while one people prefer to live with theirselve, the others people prefer to live with their brother or sister. As for me, i would like to live with my brother or sister because, though living with my sibling might be annoying, i'm sure living with sibling grant many advantage than living without sibling.
The most important fact why living with sibling is benefit is, having sibling may bring good social relationship. The 2006 statstics said 1000 teenagers who have no brother or sister are having problem for social relationship because they didn't have chance to learn how to make the relationship in the house with their sibling. However, another 1000 teenagers who have at least one sibling are barely having problem for relationship. That is, the statistics prove having sibling is major factor for making relationship.
The other reason is, sibling is the best friend for everybody. Frankly, many teenagers tend to be reluctant to say their private serious problem to their friends because their friend might disclose their private to others friend. However, many teenagers like to say their problem to their sibling because they know their brother or sister would not uncover their problem to anybody because they are family and they are saving each others credit by growing up together. So, having sibling is good for solving or lessing their deep problem.
The final one is, sibling may become a great tutor or teacher. As a my experience, my sister was great help for me during my final exam. When i found difficult problem, my sister used to help me out. Even though my sister sometimes made a mistake, it was great aid for me because we could put our brain together for the problem, and it usually got done pretty quickly. Just like that, the siblings may become very close and useful tutor.
As you see, having sibling has many beneficial. I already know some of people might complain about their sibling because having sibling may cause petty fighting. However, if you see futher, you would prefer to live with your brother or sister because when you see futher, you could see how great having sibling in your life.
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