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Some
people might assert that doing several tasks at once will be much better than
doing tasks one at a time while others do not. Both sides may have their own
reasons to support their views. In my opinion, I would say that it is much
better to do tasks one at a time. The reason is because people can concentrate
better when I do just one task doing only one task.
The
most primary reason for why I believe it is better to do one task at a time
than to do many tasks at once belongs to the fact that people's concentration
will increase be increased. Some people might think that people can get easily bored when they
deal with one task at a time. Also, they claim that if they do several tasks at
once, they won't get bored and this will result in high quality of work.
However, this is not true. If people work at several tasks, they would move
frequently one subject to another subject. This will cause people hard to
concentrate and also make them confuse what they had done did before. Thus, people
get low quality in their own works and this will make people to spend a lot of
time to remembering remember the work they had done before. For instance, when I was in
college, I had lots of subjects to study for the final exam. I usually studied
my subjects just one at a time because if I study several subjects at once, I
get confused what I learned and all of the subjects get mixed up. This really
helped me to know deeply about my particular subject. Also, this resulted in a
high grade in that subject that I got A+. Sometimes my friend said that if I
studied like this way, it will take a long time and it is not efficient for me.
She recommended me to study the whole subjects at once which will help me to
finish it earlier. I accepted here advice and tried it in next semester. It
took a lot of time when I studied the whole subjects at once. This is because
detail information in the whole subjects was mixed up that I had to match the
detail information to particular subjects. This shows that it is much better to
study specific subject at a time even though we have lots of things to study. (설명없이 갑자기 결론을 맺은 거 같습니다)
In
conclusion, I strongly believe that it is better to do particular thing at a
time than doing several tasks at once for the reason I have mentioned above.
The truth is that doing one task at a time will make people to concentrate
better which result in high quality of their work. Good: 24~30 점수: 24 보통 독립형 에세이의 기본적인 틀은 바디를 쓰실 대 2 개 이상이여야 합니다. 하지만 본인의 에세이인 경우는 이유를 하나만 들었지만 바디 안에 필요한 정보들이 다 들어간 거 같습니다 예를 들면 구체적인 설명과 예시. 하지만 다만 아쉬운점은 바디 1 마지막 부분에서 좀 더 설명을 주고 결론을 맺는게 더 좋았을 거 같습니다. 너무 갑자기 결론을 준 경향이 있습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
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